House of Cards

Some of you have seen this story, some of you haven’t. I was holding out on posting it online in the hopes that I’d find a magazine to publish it. As it turns out, there’s not much of a market for longish short fiction for young adults. As always, genuine feedback is greatly appreciated!

House of Cards http://d1.scribdassets.com/ScribdViewer.swf?document_id=39605966&access_key=key-1bw7h975o1f3dtdi8r9u&page=1&viewMode=list

2 thoughts on “House of Cards

  1. Melissa
    Thank-you for sharing this. It is really a great story. Can’t believe there isn’t a market for it. I think your nephew would love this in a couple of years. Love you

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  2. I couldn’t stop reading, and it was a great story. It reminded me a lot of The Giver- which I also liked. Very well written and well thought out. You seem to have a good combination of talent and passion for writting, so keep it coming!

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